*noodlz15
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Song Within a SongThe twilight came and after burned night, Stopping every five miles to look back, To listen for the screen door slamming Over the crackle of bridges in flames.Song Within a Song
Yet there were never any bright lights Just the red shining behind the content Fading away to the promised land behind, The land of sleep and love and the past.
What stars always shone have burst Into the dark sky she sleeps beneath, Whisper her name that everyone forgot.
He cries her song into the grey morning Lost, forever lost to the world she's in Unable to sleep because he'll dream a
in Song on 5/28/08
Fourteen Minuteshe said it was going to be alright while evening came on all to quickly at last and she held his hand between the seats.Fourteen Minutes
the needle was on empty but who cared just how far you got now, because where could you go in fourteen minutes?
and she sang and held the wheel tight the rearview mirror reflected lights and city spires purple blue and black
he kissed her on the cheek just once.
the sun had nearly set on their time headlights spun across the white lines and she turned around to take them home
he held her hand between the seats &n
in Open on 4/12/08
The TrenchesIt's been months since we've left the trenches, Sitting in shambles and tatters on makeshift benches, The sun should be up By now beyond a doubt But some damned idiot's gone and blocked him out.The Trenches
The bullets, the bombs, the gas and the noise! We're the most willing of victims, the smallest of toys, And all day and all night We wear stamped numbered tags, So they know who we are when we go home in bags.
I remember the poor Corporal like it was yesterday, One shout, and the medics laid him down on some hay, But I knew they were done Trying to make him fee
in Fixed on 4/8/08
True ColorWhere have you gone now to escape the dream, To chase away dark night with false sunrise? I used to be amazed at the way you sang to me, But now I'm always dying for the way you hide.True Color
Afraid to let the lights shine like yesterday, To let the dancing shadows drag you under - The wind in the trees is calling you back And the rain on the grass soothes you to sleep.
What makes the sky so blue on the other side? The mirror you broke through to paper forests Is in shards all over the bedroom floor now, And I wonder how much you bled to run away.
It's all so
in Open on 3/25/08
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- Websitehttp://schwarzemuse.tripod.com
- Emailsovietcommissar@gmail.com
- AIMnoodlz154
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- Current Age: 19
- Current Residence: Virginia, United States
- Favourite movie: The Battle of Britain
- Favourite band or musician: My Chemical Romance, Rufus Wainwright
- Favourite genre of music: Classical
- Operating System: Windows XP SP 2
- MP3 player of choice: Apple iPod Photo
- Favourite game: Call of Duty 4
- Favourite gaming platform: PC
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...can I see you smile?
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I just started to feel empty again...
I lost interest in everything...
I'm broken...
I'm down.
Wow! You really are a brilliant poet, aren't you?
Why don't you join the poetry contest from [link] ?
It's free and every nitwit such as myself who enters gets a small gift
but someone like you might win one of their $10 000 or $100 000 prizes.
And I guessed that, it's the same avatar as you have on AIM.
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"I ask the forgiveness only of the one whose blood is on my sword; and place faith in retribution only within myself, for God has forsaken the faithful."
- Marie Wagner, Kreis des Alchemisten
Oh, and this is Michelle if you were wondering.
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I will not be another clone just to be cool. I will not change myself to be your friend. I will not hide who I really am behind a mask of stupidity and conformity. I am who I am so deal with it.
It occurred to me that I'd made a lapse in judgment before you let me know, honestly.
I'm officially an idiot.
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"I ask the forgiveness only of the one whose blood is on my sword; and place faith in retribution only within myself, for God has forsaken the faithful."
- Marie Wagner, Kreis des Alchemisten
you know what about.
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Always complain in a slow, low voice.
If you start in a screech you have nothing to crescendo up to.
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"The only way to atone for being occasionally a little over-dressed is by being always absolutely over-educated." ~Oscar Wilde
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"I ask the forgiveness only of the one whose blood is on my sword; and place faith in retribution only within myself, for God has forsaken the faithful."
- Marie Wagner, Kreis des Alchemisten
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"I ask the forgiveness only of the one whose blood is on my sword; and place faith in retribution only within myself, for God has forsaken the faithful."
- Marie Wagner, Kreis des Alchemisten
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"Nothing is final because it seems all the while."
John Frusciante
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open the firedoor
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open the firedoor
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"I ask the forgiveness only of the one whose blood is on my sword; and place faith in retribution only within myself, for God has forsaken the faithful."
- Marie Wagner, Kreis des Alchemisten
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HarajukuJunkie,,,,
(lovesLife)
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Do you understand it thuroughly...
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No clichés.
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Oh well.
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No clichés.
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"I ask the forgiveness only of the one whose blood is on my sword; and place faith in retribution only within myself, for God has forsaken the faithful."
- Marie Wagner, Kreis des Alchemisten
And for that matter, when I did try to do Earth, I could never decide what was the right angle.
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"I ask the forgiveness only of the one whose blood is on my sword; and place faith in retribution only within myself, for God has forsaken the faithful."
- Marie Wagner, Kreis des Alchemisten
Definately faving.
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No clichés.
(Earth)..
He actually made a song representing Earth.
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No clichés.
it makes me realy happy
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If this is a dream
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I want to sleep 4 ever
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"The man who learns only what others know
is as ignorant as if he learns nothing.
The treasures of knowledge are the most rare, and guarded most harshly. "
-Chronicle of the First Age
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